Tuesday, April 30, 2013

Savage ( third, very extensive revision )

savage is a good word
                 a beastly word

it does what it wants to
some words are lazy
like procrastinate or 
                           guess
but savage…
now that’s a word with      teeth
lions and sharks are savage
a wild eyed              mountain man
is savage
reality – savage
             savage is a machinist 
bending steel
             savage is the sun's core
roaring
in a grand fusion

savage is      savage
it's a good word
it moves with purpose
savage hunts down    other    words
consuming them
while some British personality narrates

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